I Could…..

March 3, 2007 at 5:24 pm (Poetry) ()

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A little poem I wrote some time ago for someone I cared for. It didn\’t work out the way I would have liked it to at the time but now I know why it didn\’t. It wasn\’t meant to be because there was something, someone else out there for me. I still love this poem though so decided after keeping it to myself for such a long time it was time to share it.

 

I could…

 

I could breathe you in and fill my lungs with you, like the heady scent of jasmine on a clear spring evening.

I could drink you in and let you run down my throat, like cold sweet mango nectar on a balmy summers day.

I could wrap my arms around you and quietly listen to your heartbeat, until mine synchronised with yours like a mother carrying her unborn child.

I could stare into your eyes and see the beauty in your soul, sparkling like the stars on a cloudless night.

I could run my fingers through your silky hair and softly trace your lips with my fingertips forgetting there was anything else in the word.

I could kiss your closed eyelids as gently as a butterfly landing on a flower petal and as lightly as a dandelion seed drifting through the air.

I could put my mouth to your ear and whisper my love to you as deeply and as warmly as a purring kitten.

I could hold you so close that I no longer know where I end and you begin.

I could follow you to the end of the earth and leave everything else behind.

I could give you my heart and want for nothing more.

If you wanted me to I could

If you wanted me to I would.

 

Love Me xxxx

P.S. I took this photo around the time I wrote the poem.

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26 Comments

  1. Anonymous said,

    a very beautiful poem with so much feeling and love with sharing from your heart!! love it xo j

  2. Bowzer said,

    Phew! That left me weak at all four knees!

  3. Mac said,

    I can tell that comes from the heart, Fluffy.

  4. Anonymous said,

    A very lovely read,Who this was meant for must be in pure utter anquish.He indeed lost greatly.Ty so much for this share.I emplore you to continue your writing.(((Fluffy)))00 god bless..

  5. Trippinjimi said,

    There’s great imagery and rhythm in these words Fluffy, and the sentiment came straight from the heart. If someone wrote me a poem like that i’d be over the moon.

  6. Anonymous said,

    With a tear in my eye & a heavy heart I wish I could find someone that would love me like that I would never let her go and give her all my love forever and never stray from her!Steve A.

  7. Anonymous said,

    I loved your poem.

  8. Anonymous said,

    So sweet, so loving. Such a wonderful expression of your feelings. Thank you for sharing this.

  9. jackaloopa said,

    it makes me ache…it’s poignant and heartfelt…

  10. Anonymous said,

    awwww,thats a great poem from so deep to feel inside..thats what we need in our life…thank you for sharing the loving poem…have a great night..be safe and well,stay sweet just like that poem..huggsss and kisses for you from the heart….xoxoxo

  11. Anonymous said,

    Hoooo Booooooy!! this is really nee I love it. yes this is the somebody that falling really Deeply. yhank you for sharing.

  12. Anonymous said,

    wow, a marvellous poem which brings so much loving feeling. i would exchange anything for being loved like this. u must make a good lover 😉 and a great poetess too 🙂 may i borrow your lovely poem to show my love to my dream man?

  13. vickie_bowie said,

    So so beautiful, soulful and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing it.

  14. Anonymous said,

    Thank you.Very beautiful poem.

  15. Curtis said,

    that poem would do me in lol

  16. Anonymous said,

    That my dear is a very beautiful poem,love it so keep them going my dear,
    Cobbler,cobbler,mend my shoe.
    Get it done by half-past two;
    Stitch it up and stich it down,
    And then I’ll give you half a crown.

  17. Anonymous said,

    There are two most common reasons why we could write like this…
    1. When we are very much in love
    2. When we are in the deepest of sorrows

    Whatever…you have written what is really inside your heart. I can feel it just by reading the poem.

  18. Anonymous said,

    How is it that without even knowing you, I feel this familiarity in what you have written. This poem passionatly evokes what my heart has felt for the someone I have lost. There were obstacles of distance and circumstance, but like you I would have given up everything for him. I would have traveled to the ends of the earth “if I could”. With your permission I would like to post this on my page, giving credit to you of course, in hopes that he might read it. Please keep writing dear one and I’m secretly wondering if you ever wonder “what if” with your love lost.?? I know I do.

  19. ♥♥♥ r o s e said,

    you write so wonderful, you must have loved somebody very much and you put all words and feeling you got together to an amazing poem, thank you for sharing with us….

  20. Anonymous said,

    I enjoyed the poem.

  21. laid b said,

    A breath of fresh air.

  22. Anonymous said,

    ahh very beautiful. From the heart From the soul.More people need to be like this and the world would be a much nicer place

  23. Traveler said,

    You got my vote!

  24. joseph said,

    WOW! What a poem! When I read it my legs grew weak, like a newborn giraffe struggling to its feet.
    You know, I love verse and prose that comes from the heart and it is very apparent that is exactly where this poem derives from.
    Excellent!
    Joe 🙂

  25. Anonymous said,

    wow! i write poetry myself, but i’ve never written anything this deep and emotional. wow! i really like this one.

  26. Anonymous said,

    Lovely. Thanks. You are a very sensitive, talented spirit.

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